Revisions to the Film

We received plenty of feedback from our classmates and teacher on our film. Our film recieved plenty of compliments on the quality of the shots and editing. However, we discovered that from the viewer's point of view, the film was hard to follow and didn't make much sense. Our group decided that we would need to re-work certain aspects of the film. One thing that the audience didn't understand was why the contact on the phone said "Madison" as she was supposed to be kidnapped. We have decided to change the contact name that appears to just a phone number as the main character is supposed to be receiving an anonymous tip. Another aspect of the film that didn't make much sense to the audience was who is calling the girl in the intro and who the main character is. To fix this issue, we decided to include another scene in the intro. After the plane lands, we plan on going to Sarasota International Airport to film a scene in which Sam is walking out of the airport on his cellphone. This would make a connection with the voicemail and it would indicate that the main character just arrived to town.